Nature's Life(acrostic)

Very original and interesting poem. Imagery is great and you created excellent atmosphere with just a few words. Well done! 5/5

Yes it is short but its meaningful. In the little space you had you expressed your thoughts very well. written to fit the space not making the space fit all you have to write. 5/5

It was short, and it didnt need to be longer, its fine and self explanatory all by itself

Nicely done, rather cute. You did another excellent job. 5/5

Yer cute again, but could be developed perhaps this should have been a hiaku? just and idea xxx alex xxx