It was short, but not a bad little poem. straight to the point. =) Keep it up.
~Ally~

Hey!..short but very well penned!...kp up de good wk!...5/5
Tk care!
xx Pooja xx

Yer cute again, but could be developed perhaps this should have been a hiaku? just and idea xxx alex xxx

Nicely done, rather cute. You did another excellent job. 5/5

It was short, and it didnt need to be longer, its fine and self explanatory all by itself

Yes it is short but its meaningful. In the little space you had you expressed your thoughts very well. written to fit the space not making the space fit all you have to write. 5/5

Very original and interesting poem. Imagery is great and you created excellent atmosphere with just a few words. Well done! 5/5