Little Kitten

by Brittany C   May 8, 2007


Little kitten joyful as can be
playing in the backyard
with a little ball of red yarn.
You look as cute as a baby,
and as soft and fluffy as a pillow.

Run in the grass.
Don't be afraid.
You maybe small,
but you'll get bigger
someday I promise.

So go on and play.
Follow the beautiful moths,
and pounce when you get close.
Just don't go getting lost
the grass and flowers are tall.

Don't go in the neighboring yard little one,
unless you want to become breakfast.
You are not yet a match for that dog.
Why don't go play with your brother's?
You have time to harass dog when you're older.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This was by far the cutest poem I have ever read! The flow was a little shaky... but the word usage was excellent! And I absolutely loved the concept... Too bad when kitty gets older he's going to be bad :( lol 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    It was very sweet, but the strucutre and flow could have been a little better

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    You maybe small
    [[You may be small. Space between "may" and "be".]]

    This honestly isn't the best poem I've ever read, but it was a nice change of topic. I'm sorry, but I didn't really enjoy it. There wasn't much discription and the flow/non-rhyme was not to my taste.
    Sorry. =/

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Very cute. I like kittens too. the word choice was good. Again sweet read. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Very cute poem. great for a non rhyming poem. 5/5 Just the last line in the last stanza is forgetting the you. Don't see many people write about animals around here. I'm glad you did, I love them. keep up the good work

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