Aww, this was so cute..lol The word choice wasn't my favorite, but it was adorable. Great poem, and great message, keep it up. =) 5/5 |
Awwww...cho cute!......lovely wrk!...very sweet!..Kp it up!... |
Really sweet poem but i think the third line should have another word instead of button because they arnt really cute lol maybe baby instead i dont know just an idea xxx alex xxx |
Very cute poem. great for a non rhyming poem. 5/5 Just the last line in the last stanza is forgetting the you. Don't see many people write about animals around here. I'm glad you did, I love them. keep up the good work |
by Vanessa
Very cute. I like kittens too. the word choice was good. Again sweet read. 5/5 |
You maybe small |
It was very sweet, but the strucutre and flow could have been a little better |
This was by far the cutest poem I have ever read! The flow was a little shaky... but the word usage was excellent! And I absolutely loved the concept... Too bad when kitty gets older he's going to be bad :( lol 5/5 |