Comments : Little Kitten

  • Aww, this was so cute..lol The word choice wasn't my favorite, but it was adorable. Great poem, and great message, keep it up. =) 5/5
    ~Ally~

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Awwww...cho cute!......lovely wrk!...very sweet!..Kp it up!...
    Tk care!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Really sweet poem but i think the third line should have another word instead of button because they arnt really cute lol maybe baby instead i dont know just an idea xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Very cute poem. great for a non rhyming poem. 5/5 Just the last line in the last stanza is forgetting the you. Don't see many people write about animals around here. I'm glad you did, I love them. keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Very cute. I like kittens too. the word choice was good. Again sweet read. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    You maybe small
    [[You may be small. Space between "may" and "be".]]

    This honestly isn't the best poem I've ever read, but it was a nice change of topic. I'm sorry, but I didn't really enjoy it. There wasn't much discription and the flow/non-rhyme was not to my taste.
    Sorry. =/

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    It was very sweet, but the strucutre and flow could have been a little better

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This was by far the cutest poem I have ever read! The flow was a little shaky... but the word usage was excellent! And I absolutely loved the concept... Too bad when kitty gets older he's going to be bad :( lol 5/5