Mess

by Erin   May 8, 2007


My heart is weeping, wanting your arms around me
I'm pleading for you to come back
You looked at me a shamed of who Ive become
I'm yelling for you to stop but you faded away into the black

You left me here weak and wounded, you left me as a mess
Your leaving me scars of horror in my dreams
Remaining me with nothing but distress
The blade is getting deep and all there is are screams

You told me Ive hurt you
Even though I'm the one left with all the cuts
there are no more colors now all i see is blue
this time there are no more "buts"
Ive told you a lie, a lie thats to big of a knot to untie.

*State that this is not true i just wrote it for fun. please coment n vote id like to kno if it is good or not thank you. Erin*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    I liked the consept (i can't spell :P) And i liked the words that you chose, but the flow wasn't great. Not that really matters, but yeah. I still thought it was excellent. 5/5 Xx Chrissie

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is a nice poem which is written truly.
    you have captured the readers attention with your great work.
    a 5/5 from me because you deserve it.

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