I think meads should be meds. Other than that the flow seemed a little off, but the word choice and the vocab made up for it. the emtion was strong and clear, and the format was great. you did another well done job.4/5

Great work. It was so truthful, and I loved every word of it. The flow was really off, I think. If you break it into stanzas it will read a lot better. If it's in paragraph form for a more direct approach on the meaning, then it works. Over all, I was impressed. It's a new style I have come across, and I don't regret reading this.

Take care,
Alesia

This is unlike anything i've ever read..
It's actually quite a chilling topic as well when i really think about it. A drug is a drug, regardless of name or effect and it's quite scary when we think of how dependent the human race has become on these little 'miracles' as they were once hailed.
Kudos m'dear. Excellent work
5/5
*Gem*

Very powerful! you write unique poems which is very good! good choice of words! uhm just edit your poem because there are some weird words. :)

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Nice work. i love the flow of the poem.

I have honestly never read any poem anything like this... I liked it, I think the flow was off a tiny bit, but the words were great and descriptive, loved it :D
SkY

First get rid of those symbol things
I enjoyed the imagery a lot
It was right on and pefect for this poem
Again I think you should break it up into stanzas
it just would be a lot easier to read
don't have to
but it's a suggestion
Great poem once again
5/5
kaila

No offense to you, of course.
But...
You should proofread your work.
And you'd find weird symbols in there.
At the very beginning,
Like I've said to some of your work before.
I found it really, really overwhelming.
When I saw it, I was like.
"Oh darn,"
Thinking: I don't want to read this whole thing.
Try to make your poems short and precise.
With emotions and all.
Other than that.
I guess it's "okay"
I didn't really understand it, though.
Help me understand?
Is it about doctors and them giving prescriptions?
If yes, how is that a bad thing, then?

A sample of what I think it would look like
If it wasn't soo overwhelming.

With a white coat on,
I start a new day for the needing mass,
a stale environment
is where I work mostly behind thick glass.
Oceans of medication that the companies
will proclaim to hinder pain,
but as I watch as they follow in suite
I wonder if its all in vain.
Years of facts about terminology
most people will never know,
of a need for the quick fix
of relief that is always in grow.

Well, first of all, those symbloy really bug me.
Other than that, you are so right. Society is depending on man-made objects instead of those which God gave us. Kinda seems like we think ourselves to be better than Him and not in His true cures. 5/5
~Steff

Hm. Again, not your best, but I liked the story behind it and the flow was very good.
You're a very strong writer.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5