by Hidden Feelings within these Words May 8, 2007
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
A Soldiers dedication to our country. |
by Robert
This is a very patriotic poem and well done too boot I gave it a 5 because of the form and flow It was very good poem to read and get the message from kudos hun. Plot121 |
by Marc Ortiz
Aww this is simply amazing 'Soldiers life!' well done! I love it and yeah Soldiers have a hard life. they're like cowboys in the past. anyway good job! I really like the theme of the poem! flow was good! good job! 5/5! |
by Vanessa
Fortunately should to be "Unfortunately"? within the restraints of an acrostic poem , the flow was amazing. I loved the message. I have a brother in the navey. Well done, excellent emtion, and well penned 5/5 |
Oh, and no periods at the end of titles. It makes the poem look ugly. =] |
In the second to last line, is Fortunately supposed to be "UNfortunately"? |