A Soldiers Life

by Hidden Feelings within these Words   May 8, 2007


A Soldiers dedication to our country.

Soldiers every day are sent out to fight.
Out of their homes during the day and night.
Leaving their families for days, months and even years.
Doing what's best for our country, though they fear.
Into a foreign land they go and are put to the test.
Expecting the worse and hoping for the very best.
Relying on our prayers to get them through,
Stepping into battle, do you think that's easy to do?

Liberty is what they fight for us each day.
It's hard for our soldiers to want to stay.
Fortunately they'll go and fight against all wrong.
Encouraging them we must do, to help keep them strong.

This is an acrostic poem. =)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    This is a very patriotic poem and well done too boot I gave it a 5 because of the form and flow It was very good poem to read and get the message from kudos hun. Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww this is simply amazing 'Soldiers life!' well done! I love it and yeah Soldiers have a hard life. they're like cowboys in the past. anyway good job! I really like the theme of the poem! flow was good! good job! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Fortunately should to be "Unfortunately"? within the restraints of an acrostic poem , the flow was amazing. I loved the message. I have a brother in the navey. Well done, excellent emtion, and well penned 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Oh, and no periods at the end of titles. It makes the poem look ugly. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    In the second to last line, is Fortunately supposed to be "UNfortunately"?

    Great job. This poem flowed beautifully, especially with such restrictions as an acrostic. Well written and keep the ink flowing!
    5/5
    ~Stephen White

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