In the second to last line, is Fortunately supposed to be "UNfortunately"?

Great job. This poem flowed beautifully, especially with such restrictions as an acrostic. Well written and keep the ink flowing!
5/5
~Stephen White

Oh, and no periods at the end of titles. It makes the poem look ugly. =]

Fortunately should to be "Unfortunately"? within the restraints of an acrostic poem , the flow was amazing. I loved the message. I have a brother in the navey. Well done, excellent emtion, and well penned 5/5

Aww this is simply amazing 'Soldiers life!' well done! I love it and yeah Soldiers have a hard life. they're like cowboys in the past. anyway good job! I really like the theme of the poem! flow was good! good job! 5/5!

This is a very patriotic poem and well done too boot I gave it a 5 because of the form and flow It was very good poem to read and get the message from kudos hun. Plot121