Damn tat was gud i liked it alot

I think you have truely amazing talent when writing poems i found this poem to be beautiful and will rate it a 5/5 The one thing i do suggest is that you change the slang words because alot of people dont like it when they read poems and vote lower then what they deserve. Thats just my opinion though. Other then that well done with this poem ~mel

Well done honey! brilliant!!!! I LOVE IT 5/5

Well done honey! brilliant!!!! I LOVE IT 5/5