I can't believe no one has commented yet. That was really good. I loved the message you were sending out, and the flow was wonderful this time, I could feel a since of pride, I like that. You did another well done Job, keep up the good work.

Wow! Fantastic!! Amazing poem... Very well written... Great flow! Each line is meaningful. Very Well done!!

This is very nice.....nice message...good and strong. very nice flow and it was meaningful.
very nice job...
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L.C
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I really enjoyed this poem. It had a lot of meaning and emotion in it. The force you used to get your point across with your words was truly a treat and it was exactly that which held my attention throughout the entire poem. For once I find arrogance with a cause.... and i applaud you for it 5/5

I agree with everything you've said! This is a really meaningful poem. I couldn't stop reading it. 5/5