by aDORKable x3 May 8, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Bruised and broken, she lays there and sighs- |
Such a beautiful poem, i wanted this in m contest, this was aimed specifically at life poems :D and i think youpulled it of so congrads you deserved it hunni :D xxx alex xxx |
Did you do this for a contest? I thought you did because there was a poem title that was called this. I really liked how you wrote this. The flow was excellent! Great poem. 5/5 |
by Bryan
I like this one, it is very good ciao, one of my fav songs and i think u did great at making a poem from it, love the flow, another 5/5!!!! keep them coming!!!! |