Comments : I have

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    As usual, very very very VERY pretty. i love your poetry, especially when about nature.
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem superbly done. It was a joy to read from start to finish, love it, keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    You brought down the house with this one!! AMAZING!!!

    Started off very strong and eneded even stronger...
    Have you ever whispered songs
    to a starless night
    and wished that fingers
    could strum them back to life,
    it's amazing
    what a simple moment can do
    if we sing our sorrow
    for old big blue?

    I am in awe of this last stanza...so much so i am left wordless for this comment!!!!!!!!!!