Young and Hopeless

by in the realm of Chaos   Apr 16, 2004


If I up and died tomorrow,
Would your heart stop beating fast?
Would you grieve all day from sorrow?
Or would you put me in your past?

I dream of love, and to be free.
So here's what I imply...
You cannot offer that to me,
So let's just say goodbye.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    very nice, thanks for commenting! lol, thanks i love bein a vegetarian =) my aim sn is iluvapplecowboys (don't ask)

  • 20 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    I liked this poem...Great Job on it, girl!!!...
    Keep on writing... Wish to see more poems of yours...Just tell me when you wrote some...:)

    **Love with the heart Sedusha**

  • 20 years ago

    by Sophi

    Hey girl I love this poem. It's really good and yet so true. You're gonna go really far in life with your poetry whether that is what you want or not but with your talent it will happen. Maybe you could check out my poems like "I hate the way"- my latest- or just type in Sophi in the :search poem-box. Thanks and you're welcome

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