by Tylor Dent May 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Remember when love. |
by Pamela
This poem is amazing, and if you can believe it is was exactly what I needed what I needed to hear after the day I had, you'll never forget the past. Every single stanza relates to what I"ve felt and done. Added this to my fav. poems because it is. Great job, I give you many props! |
I thought it was good, I know what it is like to not be able to forget the past. This poem was really sad, but I feel the ending could have been a little bit stronger. You had a wonderful opening stanza though. |