Luanne
This is wonderful :) I know your son was loving this one. Excellent job on the imagery and flow. Brought back so many childhood memories. Of me and my Mom snuggled up for the night time stories and poems.

warm sand between our toes

nodding off in the sun for a nap

knowing we will return soon

dreams and imagination our map

Loved your ending stanza. It is like you know there is mmore to come.
~CLAP~CLAP~
Take Care Love Cindy

Hahaha mom, this was sooo adorable!!! I know this is supposed to be read to an 8 year old or younger but I m about to be 16 and I liked it lol....Your goofy poems are always written with some imagination and detail...i think you should create a lil poem book for kids, I bet you'll sell a lot!!...I'll be the first one to buy them when they're in stores for you grandbabies lol!
Love you!
Chelsey

Very cute, Luanne! :) I love what imagination can do. Especially that of a 6 year old ;) And oh, how I miss RTVW!

Take care. I really miss talking to all of you.

Oh my word your amzing ... oh only i wisj i could go bake to those day 10/10 lol keep writeing

This poem made me laugh at the memories that went through my head,, thinkng of when i went to disney land wen was a child,, i loved this poem,, for so long i have hated my mother bcz she did not aprove of my boyfriend becoming my husband,, anyway u made me think of her again with your poem,, of the good memories that we had together,, lol im going to go call her,, lol,, thnxxxx
Janaynay

P.S. i loved ur poem,, 5/5

Amazing, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Your poem really took me to a wonder land. Its a cool poem. 5/5