Sing (haiku)

by Mommy And Me   May 8, 2007


Out upon the wind
There is a song being sung
Blue birds sing along

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  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I agree with gem^
    Thats exactly what i thought.
    Amazing imagery for a short peice.
    Well done,
    Elainex

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I liked it, it sounds like nature is singing a song and the little birds are singing along.
    It's cute =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    Very good haiku terra, such imagery in such a short piece, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I liked it but was a little confused by the ending line, I don't know; maybe because it's so short and you don't have enough room to explain it, but I was confused,
    haha.
    Anyways,
    5.5
    =]