I liked it but was a little confused by the ending line, I don't know; maybe because it's so short and you don't have enough room to explain it, but I was confused, |
Very good haiku terra, such imagery in such a short piece, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!! |
by Gem
I liked it, it sounds like nature is singing a song and the little birds are singing along. |
by Crystal Gaze
I agree with gem^ |