WOW IS ALL I HAVE TO SAY....LOVED IT (5)

wow, i really liked this poem, i coud feel the pain of th elittle girl, and i could visualize her hiding in a closet or ducking in a corner, excelent job, i think you may be able to relate to some of my poems you should check it out if you have the time, peace!

GIRL THIS POEM IS THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ AND I'M DEAD SERIOUS THIS POEM IS BETTER THAT MINE YOU MAKE ME WANT TO STAY UP ALL NIGHT AND TRY TO WRITE ONE BETTER AND BELIEVE ME I HAVE TRIED. YOU WRITE FROM YOUR HEART LIKE ME ITS LIKE YOU WRITE FROM YOUR OWN REAL LIFE EXPERIENCE JUST LIKE ME TOO. I WOULD LOVE TO GET TO KNOW YOU BETTER LIKE CHAT ON THIS AND SHARE POEMS OR SOMETHING SO JUST HIT ME UP WITH A COMMENT OR TWO OR JUST EMAIL ME PLEASE!!!! EMAIL ME BECAUSE I THINK ME AND YOU CAN GET ALONG VERY WELL REMEMBER EMAIL ME BYE

Thanx soooo much fo da comments... i really appreicate it... XoXo DeBrA xOxO

Thank yu guyz sooooo much!!! XoXo
Luv,
Debra

I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM IT WAS REALLY DEEP AND MADE ME THINK

oh my gosh..... that is like... one of THE best poems that i have ever read! it's so sad.. its beautiful.