This is so good. it makes me feel the pain. you are talented. keep it up

Ah the emotion and effect this poem had on me was amazing. it was effective in making me feel sad, thats wat its supposed to do, so

5/5 David

Flippin amazing!
This has got to be your best poem to me. So unique - just wonderful. The flow was flawless, your word usage was great (once again) , & the emotions were strong & clear.

"Fear this is a powerful emotion
(running deeper than any ocean)
Love it makes the world go round
(It lifts you up when you are down)
Anger will destroy your heart
(Your entire world will fall apart)
Sorrow fills your eyes with tears
(Reminders of the years)
Hate will consume your soul
(soon being the only thing you know)"

^ I love those lines! Wow. So strong. Fantastic job! Keep writing! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Great poem.
The flow was flawless and the structure was great.
There was a lot of emotion shown in this poem.

Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Liar.
It's not mediocre at all.
I kind of like it.
Although it seemed you forced it,
Or it looks like you did with those
Parenthesis.
To me, it looked like a song.
Lol.
I LOVE songs.
But then it also seems story like.
Hmm...
I'll give you a 4/5 :]

Very different... Thoughtful and well expressed. I like the first stanza very much. Well done!

I loved everything about it. It is a well written poem. You should give yourself more credit. Another 5/5

Wow, this poem is really powerful. Greatly written piece, with the emotions excellently expressed.
The repetition of the word "flash" adds extra effect to the whole piece.
Well done, 5/5 from me