Comments : As Much As I Can Take (Triolet)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    A wonderfully penned form!
    In such few words you've made a very impactive statement.

    In the last line
    I've has as much as I can take.
    ^^^
    I think you may of meant
    I've had as much as I can take

    Wonderfully penned Triolet !