The Minnow

by Louis   May 8, 2007


You wanted to hate me
Because you chose to.

I lost my faith in you,
Despite all my attempts
And my good belief.
Now I give up.

I hope you will come back to me
And show me there is something still worth to see.

I wish and beg thee
Because my tears have filled this room,
And like a mermaid I wail
As my voice breaks
For my sailor to come back to me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Louis
    How very sad. Your sadness comes through in the words you write.

    I lost my faith in you,
    Despite all my attempts
    And my good belief.
    Now I give up.

    These lines really touched my heart.
    Good job!
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Torra

    I hear you me to.

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