Very powerfull and to the point, i know i wouldent stay, i liked reading this poem i gave it 5/5 :)

Cathy
This piece breaks my heart. Seems like double standards. Very emotional and heartfelt writing.

what if you were in my place
do you think maybe then you'd understand why the tears on my face
would you put up with it all or would you just leave?
If only you were In my place than maybe you would see

If only :(
Take care your friend Cindy

Cathy

This poem manages to make such a powerful point which with it follows so much emotion. you just a have to take a step back and realise how strong you are. You dont need to put up with that treatment and you shouldnt. JUst keep your chin up.

Kelly
xx

Cathy,

Powerful emotions have been fully let loose in your write. I like it very much, but if placed in a similar siyuation I would have added one more final closing stanza:

What if I could not take anymore of all of the above?
Should I pack my bags turn my back and walk away, leaving you would be best.
See a lawyer and then he will see you, send you all the seperation papers!

Great work.

Best regards,

Steve

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace