The Fallen Light Within

by Boundless   May 8, 2007


For the end of darkness
Trained by light
My soul will fight
This war inside myself
Fighting as everyone mocks
But there something inside saying
I must
I wont back down
This isn't for nothing
But as I venture
The war becomes deeper inside
I begin to fall
As I his in the corner
Letting my darkness take a hold
And fall into there night
Leaving my oath to win
Die
I failed my mission
Please forgive me

©2007 Joseph Lawson

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  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    I forgot what i was gonna say.. wait im remembering. you should never give up. not on urself. just dnt give up please. powerful piece here. ur emotion are here like all ur pieces but this one touch me the most. i can realte to this wannting to give up and feeling like we are but we cant never give up on our selves cuz we are also giving up on the ppl around us. just dnt give up! but amzing job here. Keep it up!

    TaKe CaRe always,
    Frenchy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I wasn't confused by this. There was a lot of emotion poured here. You show a great deal of sadness and despair. 5/5

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