This is good too, but i don't think you need all those question marks i think you extablished the question in the first sentance :) its good though interesting and not something i would normally read but its good : )

This 1 is great too!...loved it!...maybe it'll look a lil better with less question marks...all the same...well penned!...Nice wrk!
5/5!
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This is deep, short but thought-provoking. 5/5