by sarah
Wow thats an intense poem. it's really sad but well written. I feel for you and i'm so sorry that you had to go through that. no one deserves that crap. 5/5 |
by Cindy
Very sad. The emmotion pours from your words. Very heartfelt. Keep writing it helps. |
by moonlil
This poem brought tears to my eyes. Excellent work. |
You told me not to vote, but I had too... I love this poem... it is awesome... 5/5... I know how you felt about being sent to school in worn out clothes and worrying about what is going to happen when you get home...I have been in that situation myself... Alot of people find drugs to ease the pain... People like us let go and move on.....5/5 |
by SEXYEYES
Great poem mate.really sad when i was readin it i had tears i dont w how ne one can hurt kids still cryin now keep up the good work :-) |
by Vanessa
Powerful tracy really heartbreaking. The flow was great, the emtion was strong and deep, and the word choice amazing. Perfectly flawless poem, you have here. Tracy. keep up the excellent work |
by Robie Lincer
Thats a really nice written poem! |