Beautifull poem, akes me think of a film, lost the name of it, with Brad Pitt, the last line reminds me of the feeling I've got with his character.
It's well-written, the words are very good chosen, you've given this one thaught

Aw3som3 po3m i lov333 it so d33p and rich gr3at job 5/5 d3f!
=========cynthia m. X]

Nice

I love this poem. From start to finish it read so smooth, the direction you took with your terminology was great, i would deffinatly read this again and again. -IBE