A Pain That Lies Within (Acrostic)

by Italian Stallion   May 9, 2007


A pain that lies within,

Pouncing upon my heart.
A little every night,
I become saddened more.
Nothing tells me else wise,

The heartache stays longer.
How I wish it vanished,
And never came to me.
This heartache is too much,

Lord please help for I am sad.
Inside my heart has died,
Ending this hurtful pain.
Somehow pain still exists,

Within this loving heart.
It makes me wonder,
To no avail, what
Had went so wrong.
It had to be a love,
Near and dear to me.

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

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Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title. Pretty straight forward, no rhyme scheme or syllable count.
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  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    I find acrostics rather hard to flow and to fit each line well with eachother yet you nailed it here. I like the title, it appealed to me and the story was heartbreaking. I could really feel the emotion throughout this one and I wouldn't change this one bit, it is a wonderful, yet painful piece. You sure have talent. :]

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    Perfection is the only word for this joe, i know how you feel im going through this too, you captured the feeling completely in this poem!!! sorry bout the situation man!!!! i give it a 5/5!!! keep them comming!!!!

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