Perfection is the only word for this joe, i know how you feel im going through this too, you captured the feeling completely in this poem!!! sorry bout the situation man!!!! i give it a 5/5!!! keep them comming!!!!

I find acrostics rather hard to flow and to fit each line well with eachother yet you nailed it here. I like the title, it appealed to me and the story was heartbreaking. I could really feel the emotion throughout this one and I wouldn't change this one bit, it is a wonderful, yet painful piece. You sure have talent. :]

Tammie