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by Soft Parade May 9, 2007 category : Love, romance / first love
Amidst fantasy, you'd come and go. Throughout the river, your beauty flowed. Lake transition, the time and show, one story glowed. Amidst Reality, sparks flew. Though out the spring, the days were cool. Atop a saint, hearts knew, mind the fool! Amidst the planes, first kiss. throughout my mind, intense light a Moment forever - experiencing bliss. my heart tight with new sight. Amidst time, broken rhyme. throughout the world, both adrift. Atop the twins, i recalled our time. Thankful for life's gift. by Barry Mac Court 2007
by Alexandra
Great poem. Great flow. You should really keep writing. This poem definitely deserves 5/5. -Alexandra
by elizabeth
Wow that is a fantastic poem!