First Love

by Soft Parade   May 9, 2007


Amidst fantasy, you'd come and go.
Throughout the river, your beauty flowed.
Lake transition, the time and show,
one story glowed.

Amidst Reality, sparks flew.
Though out the spring, the days were cool.
Atop a saint, hearts knew,
mind the fool!

Amidst the planes, first kiss.
throughout my mind, intense light
a Moment forever - experiencing bliss.
my heart tight with new sight.

Amidst time, broken rhyme.
throughout the world, both adrift.
Atop the twins, i recalled our time.
Thankful for life's gift.

by Barry Mac Court 2007

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  • 14 years ago

    by Alexandra

    Great poem. Great flow. You should really keep writing. This poem definitely deserves 5/5.
    -Alexandra

  • 17 years ago

    by elizabeth

    Wow that is a fantastic poem!

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