Comments : I just need space

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job on this piece. I'm glad you made up with your friend. Good friends are hard to come by and are one of lifes greatest treasures.

    So if you let me have my space,
    Everything will turn out fine.
    We will forget this ever happened,
    And pretend we erased it from time.
    If you remember correctly,
    I've said I still love you,
    I'll still be there in the end,
    Cause that what best friends do.

    Loved this stanza.
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lol....very beautiful poem=)

    We will forget this ever happened,
    And pretend we erased it from time.

    ^^I love these lines..so true n beautiful..i can relate to these words

    I've said I still love you,
    I'll still be there in the end,
    ^^So cute....very sweet..

    nice to knw u've made up wth ur frend..
    kp writing...loved this wrk!!
    5/5!
    xxPoojaxx
    Cause that what best friends do.

  • Hay willow... amelia here this is my new account... well yer dnt have much to say atm but im going to put all my old poems onto this account ok well cya love ya xoxox