Heartless Core

by David   May 9, 2007


My broken heart
Tries hard to repair
It's dearly missing
The love in the air

It's confused and lonely
It can't remember its tune
My hearts blind and lost
It's all come way too soon

Begging and pleading
Crying on the ground
Tries desperately to find you,
So it can be found

Within my body
Inside of me,
I start to pull, start to rip
So violently

Go deeper and deeper
To my heartless core
No point, no reason
To face life anymore

Cause why fight the struggle
Why battle the pain
Just give up and admit defeat
So for once, just once, you were sane...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Joe

    T_T you are...something else.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    My broken heart
    Tries hard to repair
    It's dearly missing
    The love in the air

    These are the most catching lines in this piece for me. I found a minute problem in "It's all come way too soon" this line. You could revise it to make the flow better. However its 5/5 worth. Keep up the good work. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Touching, inspiring all in all ur a brilliant author 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessieca

    Good poem, i loved it, i also think there is no room for sanity in love only bliss

  • 17 years ago

    by Danny Silva

    Damn man that was deep i know exactly how you feel . mad props

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