U have a great talent and i can noticed that! coz u know how to arrange ur poems by word expressions. theres a deep feeling in this poem and u can maintain the good flow! aside from flow and rhyme i love the message it was extremely and awesome! love it!5/5

I really like this poem!

Its really really really good :)

5/5

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Damn man that was deep i know exactly how you feel . mad props

Good poem, i loved it, i also think there is no room for sanity in love only bliss

Touching, inspiring all in all ur a brilliant author 5/5

My broken heart
Tries hard to repair
It's dearly missing
The love in the air

These are the most catching lines in this piece for me. I found a minute problem in "It's all come way too soon" this line. You could revise it to make the flow better. However its 5/5 worth. Keep up the good work. :)

T_T you are...something else.