Hey, this was a really good piece of writing, i liked the way the poem flowed throughout, it was very powerful and filled with emotion. great work,
take care,
xxEmmaxx

Hang in there, angel. For it's a sad story you tell...5/5, touches the heart.

cheers, haz.

Again deep, and a little twisted. I am hoping it gets better, The poem had a great flow again the word choice was brillant and the emtion powerful. keep it up.5/5