by fvalconbridge May 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
** read this poem out loud and whisper it. It sounds so much better, I was in a bit of a sick mood when I wrote it and it really doesnâ??t sound right if itâ??s not whispered, and the punctuation should really be used properly for it to flow. |
Amazing poem, it made me shiver, and I just had to read it several times to go through the whispers |
by Tara
Wow, amazing..and intesnse...just well...wow lol sory its just too good for my words |
Wow its.. very haunting. well done. the whispering thing was really affective. 5/5 |