What a poem mane! This is beautiful! The passion and power in this piece is beyond words! I'm telling you...you did the damn thing!

I'll say all I NEED to do now is CREATE some sunshine. When I let T taste...ok let me stop!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA She'll be like Sunshine's dude...wanting to quit school and move out of Mama's house!!!! HAHAHAHA I'm just playing.......................kind of...HAHAHA

No really....awesome write!!! Can't wait to here LIVE!!!!!

Wow that is amazing i love the description. well written i gotta say.

I'm loving the changes!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL MY FRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey that was an excellent poem, very deep and dark ,wow my first ,but it was great ,keep up the good work, your friend Tracy~5/5~