The Places You Have Come To Fear The Most

by I Seem to be the Heartless   May 9, 2007


There are places in your mind
Where you once felt protected
Where, when you were thinking
You felt connected

But as the years passed
Your mind grew dark
Your thoughts were no longer as happy
As a walk in the park

These places in your mind
Have consumed you with fear
You try to scream
But there's no one to hear

Your mind, so scary,
Like an evil ghost
These are the places
You have come to fear the most

The darkness engulfed
Your once happy thoughts
It was as if
By the Devil it had been taught

Evil thoughts
Clogging your mind
Tearing at your hair
Is the only salvation you find

Overcome by fears
Of your sickening desires
Thinking too hard
Will be your demise

09May2007

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow really it was great.. it has a wonderful piece.. and i love the message it was really dark........

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Very good writing. It felt as though you were actually talking to me (even though I don't have any places in my thoughts that fit the poem). It was real and personal. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Haha, a truly dark and mysteriouss piece of work here. well-done. =)