by Run out of words May 9, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I let it spread, |
by x Mo x
The first stanza was good, but the second one was a bit...run-on. The second and fourth lines of the second stanza seem a little long and out of flow. From the third stanza on the poem was really good. The third stanza was my favorite followed by the fourth....those flowed wonderfully. Overall the poem was good. 4/5 |