"Hear the somber beating,
Of a thousand bleeding hearts,
And the world cries out in anguish,
As they break and fall apart."

This was my favorite stanza from the poem. I think it was great way to start it and draw people into the poem. Your poem was deep and sad, but the rhyming was awesome.

"Look at life through another's eyes,
Perhaps from a different angle,
The worlds no longer pretty,
Like a cursed fallen angel."

I also feel you did a great job with this stanza. I could picture exactly what you were saying. Good Job. 5/5

This is an ablolute honor to read as a poet. its practically a tribute to poets.

Ive never read anything so real and so true. It was great! The first stanza was a great opening...and the rest of the poem wasn't a let down. 5/5

This is your best work, stupid.

Again WOW. ur poems rrly hav meaning to them and they're rrly good.

I know I find my solitude,
In an alternate reality,
written from the hearts of those who love it,
A different world in poetry.

I think that this stanza is something alot of poets could relate too. Poetry helps to create whole new worlds to explore and be exposed to for I'm sure many more people than you and I. Loved this poem.

Take Care.