The starting was magical. i couldn't have wrote better myself. no one could, this was individual and perfect. well done. the flow and rhyme was amazing too.

5/5 David

This was very different than most poems I read, Fantastic fantasy is the only way to describe it. It was very moving and impossible to write to all but the most creative of minds. To that i give you 5/5. This really got me thinking.

Creative, unquie, and sheer magic. I really loved the word choice is was perfect, the flow was amazing, and the emtion was clear. The message was strong, and well written, perfectly penned, 5/5

This was another really amazing poem, I loved the way you us your metaphors and adjective to make something sound as pure as this did. Keep up the good work.

xxx alex xxx

Haha you're really good at creating an image in the reader's mind. Flow was flawless choice of words was great. Fantastic work! keep writing! You're really talented. 5/5!

Wow, I think WOW. I am impressed, breathtaking piece you are great writer! Topic is excellent and you wrote it superbly, rhythm is just, well simply amazing!!!
Muscles tired from standing,
wings too sore for landing,
it all was just a dream.
Too long standing on a pedestal,
for this, even god can fall.
^This and this stanza:
Even the darkness sparkles in his majesty,
king of honor and honesty,
yet unseen by all.
And a lion stands alone,
on his golden throne.
are INCREDIBLE! I love it, ending is also very effective, you should also be proud on this one. I like everything about it. I wish that I can give you more than 5/5