Omg!!...Beautiful work!!...lovely!..amazing...touching and the peice is just filled with lots of emotions...well penned!..kp it up!
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Very nice and beautiful words good work

I like the way you rhymed some lines! well done! flow was good! keep it up! by the way thanks for the comment.

Excellent write, well worded and flow was great, very well done, great job, ~5/5~ your friend Tracy