Eight years old (Elementary school sorrows)

by isabel   May 9, 2007


Frozen inside, I coldly stare
Stretch my arms, to reach somewhere
Your heart is a darkened stone
Why can't you leave me alone?

There is nowhere I can hide
The sadist pushed my aside
Fainting, falling into the floor
Blooded sea, can't see the shore

You know, I once was calm and kind
But now you're always in my mind
I lost myself in my own pain
Eight years old girl, going insane

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohhh this was so heartbreaking..and yet written so beautifully.
    The pain and emotions scream the words in this, really tugging on the reader's heart.
    Flow is perfect throughout, and imagery was beautifully done.

  • 17 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Im surprised this poem isnt rated higher or more popular, it is absoluetly amazing and you are so creative with all of your poem names.

    5/5

    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow
    who knew you could feel so strong
    and yet be so young
    I love this poem
    Because it shows how even the smallest kids
    can hurt

  • 17 years ago

    by Alma

    Wow. very powerful poem
    had a great effect. it was intense
    i loved it and i'm sorri 4 wat happnd 2 u
    no 1 should b made 2 feel this way
    l8rz

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