Comments : One day

  • 17 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    This is so beautiful! i absolutely love the last stanza. i like the way you don't make the rhymes seem forced, it seems so real. I can tell you put a lot of passion into your writing. Keep it up! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by ruby

    Wow! this is a really good poems...w/ such
    good meanings in it...keep up the
    good work! :]]

    ruby