What Happened

by MaSkEdSoUl   May 9, 2007


We were best friends,
Me and you.
We did everything together,
-Played, read, laughed.
Life was perfect,
Full of fun and laughter.

Then one day,
Out of the blue,
You shut me out.
No reason why,
No explanation,
Not even a word.

I tried to talk to you,
But all you did was run and hide,
Like when we used to play Hide and Seek.
But this was different,
Once you'd hide I never found you,
But if I did you were a different person....
Every time.

I miss the old you,
I miss how we were,

What happened to you??

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow I can definatly relate to this peice this is the exact same thing that happened to me and an ex friend of mine the only problem I have now is now she wants to be friends again and all of my friends have taken her back but me I just dont know what to do. I decided to hang with her but just remember what she did so that it doesnt happen again. Excellent emotion and I liked the message the only critique I have is I think that you should use a little less direct message maybe cloud it over with some metaphores, make the reader have to look to see what you are trying to say.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought this was very emotional...the depth behind the words is clear to see...
    I liked the ending, as it is very intense and hardhitting.

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Nicely written. It's hard to lose a friend especially when we don't know the reason why things went wrong.

    Keep up the great work

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Very nice, thats how me and my bestfriend are becoming and its hard to understand, but you channel the emotion so well, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Bravo, 5/5

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