Bravo, 5/5

Very nice, thats how me and my bestfriend are becoming and its hard to understand, but you channel the emotion so well, 5/5

Nicely written. It's hard to lose a friend especially when we don't know the reason why things went wrong.

Keep up the great work

Josie

I thought this was very emotional...the depth behind the words is clear to see...
I liked the ending, as it is very intense and hardhitting.

Wow I can definatly relate to this peice this is the exact same thing that happened to me and an ex friend of mine the only problem I have now is now she wants to be friends again and all of my friends have taken her back but me I just dont know what to do. I decided to hang with her but just remember what she did so that it doesnt happen again. Excellent emotion and I liked the message the only critique I have is I think that you should use a little less direct message maybe cloud it over with some metaphores, make the reader have to look to see what you are trying to say.