Simply - My Sanctuary

by Simple Sensation   May 9, 2007


One step forward,
I continue to search...
I wonder where I am headed
Where will I end?

I am looking for safety;
Searching for my answer...
I am barley a traveller,
On this large mass of land.

I am searching for a sanctuary;
Where will one be?
A place of peace and harmony...
Simply - my sanctuary.

I have not yet succeeded;
So I will continue to walk.
One step forward,
Another step, towards the answer -
Another step, towards my sanctuary...

Perfectly Imperfect
9th May 2007

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm.. very beautiful work...

    the first stanza seem so interesting to finish the poem,

    then second stanza's more interesting,, i love the way u right ur words it express well,

    ....for me it was perfect! at the beginning to the end.. u made a nice structure of ur work,, it really clearly and it flowed well.. ur such have a great imagery at young age ur so great! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Good choice of words! the title was really catchy the flow was smooth! and I can relate in the poem too.. I'm also looking for something.. I'll give this poem a 5/5! well done

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