Comments : Chutes And Ladders

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was very diffrent, and very intresting. I liked it. I found my intrigued by your words. Nice word choice, excellent, flow. well penned, great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    Brilliant poem, so many times i have felt like this in life.

  • 17 years ago

    by Isabella

    The flow is superb. The wording exelent. A nother outstanding poem from you.