by Wallace May 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
The sky had tuned cold |
by Jenni Marie
"His eyes was filled with tears" =his eyes were filled with tears. |
by Melpomene
To me this was more of a story then a pem with a rhyme but it was till good none the less. Again I liked it but I like your other poetry alot better for some reason. Still deseving of a 5/5 in my eyes as it was heartfelt and structured nicely. Keep writing. ~Mel |
I like this one very much, it is excellently written, so touching. You can pass the emotions to the reader excellently. |
by Nix
This could be in the category poems about life. Message is good and this piece is original. It reminds me on some kind of story. You expressed emotions greatly. |
by Adelle
I loved this piece the best I have read from you yet the wording was fabulous it seamed to real. |