Comments : I Believe

  • 17 years ago

    by TrueLover

    This is a good poem, you have talent, why do you only have two poems on here? I like this poem, but personally I don't go along with the last line, mostly because I don't love myself, but I do love others...

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    //* Great poem. Very truthful && inspiring. It's a wonderful message && I'm glad you shared it.

    Take care!,,*

    -Shannon <3

  • 17 years ago

    by unique

    Great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Kris

    AWESOME!!!
    SO TRUE, SO TRUE!
    GREAT WORDS OF WISDOM!
    LOVE IT!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mimi

    Omg i ttly agree with you

    ppl are so pessemistic these days but its tru, where theres a will,there's a way

    keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dylan

    I really like this peom, lots of meaning :) keep up the great writing

  • 17 years ago

    by Colourful Mind

    This is very strong writing here!! Great meaning!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kylie

    I liked your insight in this poem. It's very truthful. Good work. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    I believe this is going on my favorites list
    I have to give you a 5 for not only your outlook , but also for your insight !

  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    This is a very good poem with a positive attitude .
    I realy like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    Good

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    You are obviously a very confident and strong person, i think your poetry would be better if you let your emotions run free a bit more, let the softer side of your heart release its feelings. You write brilliantly but i would like to see if you write one in true poetry style that rhymes maybe because you have got the intelligance to be creative...

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    Aww I love this one!! Very confident and inspirational! Its how every girl should feel about herself! Awesome job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by TravisInABottle

    A very inspirational piece. You have a nice word choice, but I don't much like the repitition of the words "I believe". The last line is so true. Always take the time to get to know yourself and love yourself before ever getting involved with someone else. If you don't know who you are and love yourself, how is someone else supposed to? Great write. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lil Ally Kat Xx In love xX

    100% true in every way!!! Good in puttin it into words!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Another one leaving me speechless.....you are a wonderful poet and should keep writing....and I love that you have a big vocabulary, it really helps in poetry........

  • 16 years ago

    by Marine Wife

    Very true, but also very rare, people are very critcal and judgemental these days. and i agree that u should learn to love urself before u can love another, yet how do you know when you have learn to love yourself?

  • 16 years ago

    by DPA

    Nice poemm

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Nice job on this one, you have a way with words! I liked how you were saying you believe in God and that you can do anything you set your mind to, I totally believe in that! Nice write, and please keep writing! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very inspiring.... very motivational....
    I really liked this attitude towards life... full of positive aura... a refreshing read...

    good work...

    keep writing..