by TrueLover
This is a good poem, you have talent, why do you only have two poems on here? I like this poem, but personally I don't go along with the last line, mostly because I don't love myself, but I do love others... |
//* Great poem. Very truthful && inspiring. It's a wonderful message && I'm glad you shared it. |
by unique
Great job |
by Kris
AWESOME!!! |
by Mimi
Omg i ttly agree with you |
by Dylan
I really like this peom, lots of meaning :) keep up the great writing |
by Colourful Mind
This is very strong writing here!! Great meaning!!! |
by Kylie
I liked your insight in this poem. It's very truthful. Good work. :] |
I believe this is going on my favorites list |
This is a very good poem with a positive attitude . |
Good |
You are obviously a very confident and strong person, i think your poetry would be better if you let your emotions run free a bit more, let the softer side of your heart release its feelings. You write brilliantly but i would like to see if you write one in true poetry style that rhymes maybe because you have got the intelligance to be creative... |
by Lori
Aww I love this one!! Very confident and inspirational! Its how every girl should feel about herself! Awesome job! 5/5 |
A very inspirational piece. You have a nice word choice, but I don't much like the repitition of the words "I believe". The last line is so true. Always take the time to get to know yourself and love yourself before ever getting involved with someone else. If you don't know who you are and love yourself, how is someone else supposed to? Great write. :) |
100% true in every way!!! Good in puttin it into words!!! |
by Stephanie
Another one leaving me speechless.....you are a wonderful poet and should keep writing....and I love that you have a big vocabulary, it really helps in poetry........ |
by Marine Wife
Very true, but also very rare, people are very critcal and judgemental these days. and i agree that u should learn to love urself before u can love another, yet how do you know when you have learn to love yourself? |
by DPA
Nice poemm |
Nice job on this one, you have a way with words! I liked how you were saying you believe in God and that you can do anything you set your mind to, I totally believe in that! Nice write, and please keep writing! :) |
by Lonely Rider
Very inspiring.... very motivational.... |