Omg that was soo good but yet sad it had a lot emotion to it and a lot of people go threw that everyday i liked a lot job well done lolz

Wow, that was really sad.
The imagery was great and I loveddd the ending.
It was beautifully penned 5/5

[Sarah]

This one actually had me in tears. You arouse emotions that most people are not able to in the form of poetry. You're great! 5/5

Josie

That was a very good poem!

I feel like i was just crying but it was the taste in my mouth that i had when i woke up from sleeping haha

5/5