by Laybelled with a name May 9, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
And my mind is blank. |
by firexdancer
Wow, this is an amazing poem... your style is so surprising...... the only thing wrong was your spelling, you misspelled lots of the words and it kinda sets the reader off a bit.. |
This was... different. I liked it, but I'm sure I would have preferred it much more if you had used an actual structure. It just sort of seemed all over the place. |